I am beyond thrilled to welcome Emmy Laybourne, Author of the Monument 14 Series, to Melissa's Eclectic Bookshelf today. I absolutely adored both Monument 14 (See my 5 Star Review of Monument 14 ) and Sky on Fire (See my 4.5 Star Review of Sky on Fire ).
Guest Post
It’s such a pleasure to be here on my blog tour for SKY ON FIRE, the second book in the MONUMENT 14 trilogy. Melissa has asked me to share with you some of my process in terms of character development.
I’m delighted to be asked to dig into a “writer’s topic.” I love story structure and I frequently teach workshops and classes on writing - so it’s fun to get to go behind the scenes with you into some of the craft that makes the series work.
The MONUMENT 14 series features a large cast of kids, from age 5 - 18. In creating and working with such a large cast, I needed to put a lot of thought into making the characters different from each other, so the reader would be able to keep straight who was who!
But another challenge came along with that one - how did I make the characters different enough without resorting to stereotypes?
I had to rely on my gut. That’s the truth. I tried to use a very organic, deep method of finding and developing the characters in the book.
Some of the characters leapt right into being the moment I started thinking about the story. Dean was right there to narrate the book -- he emerged, fully formed, into my mind. A few bloggers have asked me why I didn’t make the narrator a girl - after all, most YA books are written for female readers. For me, that was never even an option. MONUMENT 14 was Dean’s story to tell.
Another character that came right to the forefront of my imagination and demanded an audience was Max. Little towheaded Max was basically pulling at my elbow, asking me to make a record of his adventures in the lowlife, backstreets of Monument, CO.
Other characters I drew from people I've known in my personal life. For example, Jake is an awful lot like a guy I had a crush on at George School, my high school, though I doubt my mystery man ever got into as much trouble as Jake. And Chloe is based on the kid of a friend. You can bet I'm not saying which kid or which friend. (Chloe's a bit of a pain in the buttinski.)
When I have trouble with a character, I draw from my background as an actor and improviser Back in the ‘90s (yes, the 1990's), I developed a process, along with my friend Sheila Head, for developing characters. It began with the body, working from outside in. We would find the physical key for each character - asking ourselves, where did they hold their energy? Was it in their feet? Their arms? Their hips?
And then we'd walk around with our body crimped up or slouched over or tilting off our tiptoes until we located the voice of the character. The voice led to the personality. The personality led to the heart - how did that character feel about the world? How did they protect themselves from others? How did the character love?
Using these tools, I would walk around the little space of my writing office, bringing Astrid or Brayden or Batiste into my body. Yeah, I know, it sounds kooky. But it works.
Another trick Sheila taught me was to go character surfing at the mall. I'd loiter around and watch for people who looked and behaved like the characters I was trying to summon. Then I'd study them. Sometimes I'd even walk behind them and copy their gait. Again, kooky, I know, but when you're making art - you use what you got. It was using this method that I got a better handle on Alex. I saw a kid who’s posture was so tidy and squared-off - I could see his world-view just from the methodical way he paced the mall.
It was my goal, that by fully living into my characters, they would rise above the labels that any reader would automatically assign. The reader was bound to put labels on, if only to help keep everyone straight. So I knew Josie'd become "the motherly one," and Brayden would be "the bully," and Sahalia "the slutty, troubled girl." The challenge was for me to get to know them so that the details our narrator Dean gave about them would break them out of those roles in the reader's mind.
I'd love to know if you think I succeeded. And if you think that the characters fell into stereotypes at times… well… let's blame Dean. He's the one who stepped up to tell the story in the first place!
The Book
Title: Sky on Fire
Series: Monument 14 #2Author: Emmy LaybourneAge Group: Young Adult
Pages: 212Genre: Post ApocalypticPublisher: Feiwel & Friends / Macmillan
ISBN: 978-0312569044
Publication Date: May 28th, 2013
Available Formats: Hardcover, E-Book
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Synopsis:
The world hasn't ended...yet.
In this sequel to MONUMENT 14, the group of survivors, originally trapped together in a superstore by a series of escalating disasters, has split in two. Most of the kids are making a desperate run on their recently repaired school bus for the Denver airport where they hope to reunite with their parents, be evacuated to safety, and save their dying friend.
But the world outside is dark and filled with dangerous chemicals that turn people into bloodthirsty monsters, and not all the kids were willing to get on the bus. Left behind in a sanctuary that has already been disturbed once, the remaining kids try to rebuild the community they lost. But when the issues are life and death, love and hate, who can you really trust?
Other Books in the series:
Dress Your Marines in White (Monument 14 #0.5)
Monument 14 ( Monument 14 #1)
The Author

Emmy Laybourne is a writer, actress and teacher who lives in upstate New York. In June of 2012, Emmy’s debut novel, MONUMENT 14, was released by Feiwel & Friends, a division of Macmillan.
MONUMENT 14 is a post-apocalyptic Young Adult thriller that follows the story of fourteen kids who get trapped in a superstore while civilization collapses outside the gates.
The novel received a starred review from Publisher’s Weekly and was called “Frighteningly real… riveting,” by the New York Times Book Review and was an Editor’s Choice. The sequel, Sky On Fire, will be released in June of 2013. The final installment of the trilogy, SAVAGE DRIFT, is expected in 2014.
Emmy Laybourne will be on tour in June as part of the Fierce Reads Tour.
See Emmy Laybourne on tour !
See Emmy Laybourne on tour !
The Giveaway
One paperback copy of Monument 14 and one hardcover copy of Sky on Fire.
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Please join Emmy for the rest of her blog tour. Tomorrow's stop will be Book Haven Extraordinaire.
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Please join Emmy for the rest of her blog tour. Tomorrow's stop will be Book Haven Extraordinaire.




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ReplyDeleteLove that Dean just sprang into her mind with his own personality and story and everything:))
Dean rocks:))
Lovely post:)
Thank you:))
I completely loved Dean as well:)
ReplyDeleteCongrats Emmy on the new release!!! Sounds awesome!
ReplyDeleteI was so excited that I got to meet Emmy Laybourne on the tour for her first book :) and I LOVED book 1. A lot. So I am very excited for the next book in this series!!!!!! This was a great post and I very much like the fact that Dean is the narrator. It is very refreshing to read a male POV. Thanks for the giveaway!
ReplyDelete:) I was so bummed that I missed her last year...I am really going to try to make it to one of the stops this year!!!
ReplyDeleteI've yet to post my review for book one, but I loved loved loved it. That review is going up next weekend, actually! This was a fabulous feature, Melissa, and I really can't wait to read book two! :)
ReplyDeleteMelissa this series has been on my wishlist and after reading Emmy's guest post I have to grab book one yesterday. I love how she developed her characters and didn't resort to a stereotypical cast ..sweet!
ReplyDeleteI picked up the first book back in march and its in my reading pile to get to..I know for certain this book would have me on my edge of my seat!! Thanks for the giveaway!!
ReplyDeleteLoved Monument 14 - can't wait for the sequel! Great cover too!
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Leanne
wuahhh i love reading M14 i think that .. is possible that can happen in the real world thing like that ... .. i am really like dying for the next book ... almendra in the rafflecopter/almeqp@hotmail.com
ReplyDeleteIf you loved the first one you definitely won't be disappointed with book 2:)
ReplyDeleteIt's a great read if you love real characters...there are quite a few in this book and it's a testament to Emmy that I didn't even need a refresher on the first book before delving into this one and being able to remember who everyone was.
ReplyDeleteYou'll love it Sarah! Bump it up on the TBR!
ReplyDeleteI love the covers for this series as well :)
ReplyDeleteI am so behind. I still have my ARC of book one to read. What is wrong with me. This is the kind of book I usually devour. I want to meet Dean and wander through this dangerous world. Great giveaway!
ReplyDeleteGet on that Heidi!! You won't be disappointed!
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read this....I've had Monument 14 on my wishlist for sooo long and now the sequel is coming out! I've got to get these books!!
ReplyDeleteIt's such a great ride:)
ReplyDeleteI can't wait to read these books! Cool post, too, it's interesting knowing how you came up with the characters :)
ReplyDeleteKeep hearing great reviews on this book, can't wait to get my hands on them!
ReplyDeleteIt's a wonderful series:)
ReplyDeleteCongrats to Emmy on the next book. I think it would be quite a challenge to write such a broad age range of characters.
ReplyDeleteI love the concept! Can't wait to read these. :D
ReplyDeleteSo glad this is told from the guy's perspective. I have teen boys who like to read but have little to choose from. Looking forward to reading these.
ReplyDeleteHi Emmy! Is it okay if I just fangirl? I'm DYING to read your books, they look ROCKING awesome! :D
ReplyDeletefreaking disqus keeps eating my comment and it is ticking me off *GOES ON A COMMENTING RAMPAGE!!! I need these books *ROAR*
ReplyDeleteCongrats!! So excited to continue this series. Crossing my fingers for more novellas :D
ReplyDeleteThis was such a great author guest post! I always wonder how authors come up with the characters they do. I've heard of some authors who refuse to have their characters based on people they know in real life. So how on earth do they come up with them? I definitely would have never thought of something like this! I have this funny picture in my head of you doing this, Emmy! And who doesn't like people watching? Has anyone ever caught you following them and copying their gait?! Thanks for the great post. I feel like I was just let in on a top secret :)
ReplyDeleteLOL....I hate when my comments get eaten!!!!
ReplyDeleteThese are definitely great as they can appeal to both genders!
ReplyDeleteI agree! And she handles the challenge so well!
ReplyDeleteYou will really enjoy them..I promise:)
ReplyDeleteCongrats Emmy! I really love the cover and the book sounds amazing.
ReplyDeleteYou definitely need to request that they order it!
ReplyDeleteI loved Monument 14, I can't wait to read the sequel.
ReplyDeleteI seriously cannot wait to read the second book, Ioved the first one!
ReplyDeleteGreat guest post! I love dystopian type books so I hope to buy the books real soon!
ReplyDeleteI am so in love with the covers for this series! I had no idea there was a 0.5 book, guess I'll have to get my hands on that one too :) Thank you!
ReplyDeleteHope you love it as much as the 1st!
ReplyDeleteIt's a great series...you won't be disappointed when you finally do score the books!
ReplyDeleteIt grabs you from page one, doesn't it?
ReplyDeleteYou'll love it:)
ReplyDeleteI still need to read the novella...I'm looking forward to a little insight on the origins!
ReplyDeleteMonument 14 was a 5 star read for me. Can't wait for the sequel!
ReplyDeleteI might have the first book in the series, I'm not sure, but I think so. And it sounds like I really need to read it!
ReplyDeleteThis looks so great! Thanks for sharing with us! I adore that cover as well.
ReplyDeleteBooks like this make me wonder whether the author had any influence from friends and family while writing it.
Thanks for the giveaway!
mestith at gmail dot com
You definitely do need to read it Candace...it's great!
ReplyDeleteYou'll love it:)
ReplyDeleteHaha, love who Emmy based Chloe on & how she's not saying which friend's kid =)
ReplyDeleteI love the first book, specially Dean but i didn´t know about Dress Your Marines in White, no i must read it too
ReplyDeleteLOVE the guest post! I really enjoyed Monument 14, so I TOTALLY can't wait to get my hands on book 2! Thanks for the amazing giveaway :)
ReplyDeleteYes..you do need to read it Candace...I think you'd really enjoy The Monument 14 series!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for the chance to win! This book looks amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like an interesting story.
ReplyDeleteIt definitely is:)
ReplyDeleteThis is one YA series that I wholeheartedly recommend!
ReplyDeleteI haven't read any of your stuff but I love post-apocalyptic themes and can't wait to read these!
ReplyDeleteLOVED the first book & I can't wait for this one! Congrats in the release! Thanks for the giveaway
ReplyDeleteI didnt know she wrote books! this looks like a good read! Congrats on the new release Emmy
ReplyDeleteI loved Monument 14 and I can't wait to read Sky On Fire!!!
ReplyDeleteI really, really want to read this series! It sounds amazing. :)
ReplyDeleteMonument 14 sounds great :)
ReplyDeleteThese covers are gorgeous. The books sound great~definitely looking forward to checking them out!
ReplyDeleteHi Emmy,
ReplyDeleteI *just* (meaning, yesteday lol) picked up Monument 14 from my local library. I was only made aware of your book/series a few days ago from a different stop on your blog tour (see, they really work! lol). Anyways, thanks for having this tour or I never would have know about your book! I hope my library doesn't take too long to get the Sky on Fire!
I'm not a writer, but as a reader, I kind of "turn off" when there are a lot of characters that are written in a way that makes it hard to tell them apart. I always feel as though if written correctly, I can hear and visualize each character in my head as they show up in a novel. I love that you make such a conscious effort to avoid any character confusion. :)
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